literature

Cry For the Show

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Literature Text

I don't often cry,
Because when you ask,
Is when I finally do.
I do it for you.

To show you that you scared me.
To show you that I care.
To show you when you went away,
I was scared that you weren't there.
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ALBDreamweaver's avatar
The second stanza -- which I assume is some sort of refrain -- is the best stanza I've seen on any work today. It's simply phenomenal, and I can even hear it put to music in my mind when I read it.

The first needs a bit of polishing, but it's far from bad in its own right.